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Coming Home

Coming Home

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Karen is out travelling in the far desert lands (possibly meeting Joaquin mid-way), so she asked me to post this piece here on her behalf.

You might have already read this over at her place here, but this totally deserves a second read so here goes:

 

When you left the house this morning,

I was sitting in my chair,

huddled over coffee and uttering a prayer

that you would come home safely

to sit down in your place,

a smile for me a gleaming

through the coal dust on your face.

You'd reach with blackened hands

like so many times before

to take my own within them

as we sat there on the porch,

and you'd tell me how you love me

and the way you'd thought all day

of the dinner I'd have waiting

and of how I'd always say,

"John, I love you, mister!

You've come home to me again,

and I've waited in my breathing

so I can breathe again.

Now go and wash that dirt off,

and, mind, don't track the floor.

I've dinner warm awaiting.

Set your bucket by the door."

Then I'd heave my old worn body

from the seat where every day

I sit and watch the dirt road

for the cloud that comes this way

when your truck pulls up the holler,

and I watch you as you come

and your eyes light up like diamonds

at the love that pulls you home.

They say you've gone away now,

but I sit here by the door

and watch for clouds of glory

to bring you like before.

 

Dedicated to all of the grieving families who lost loved ones in the Montcoal mining disaster on April 5, 2010. May God bless and keep and comfort them.

 

Karen
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  • http://lyricsandmaladies.blogspot.com/ joaquin

    reading this, and looking at the photo, i thought of the recent mine disaster in china – a world away, but the feelings – the heartbreak – is the same.

  • http://margaretsagri.blogspot.com Margaret

    Karen,

     

    This has such a smooth pace. I'm almost afraid to read to the end because I know what's coming!  The years of love and companionship between the couple is so evident in your lines. Then all that togetherness has to come to a brutal end through a tragic accident in the coal mines.

     

    LIfe can be so cruel and now it's hit those poor families near you. May they find the strength to carry on.

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