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Conquered

Conquered

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She’d made it!

She’d really made it!

At the sight of the colourful flags blowing carefree in the cool mountain air, Sheila’s felt her heart skip a beat.

She’d never seen a more beautiful picture than the multicoloured, welcoming sight before her eyes.

Exhausted, she sat down on a large boulder. Taking her handkerchief from her pocket and without diverting her eyes from her goal she slowly wiped the sweat from her forehead and upper lip. Her heartbeat began to slow down, her breathing became more relaxed.

Letting out a long sigh, she closed her eyes for a moment.

Breathing deep, she greedily gulped the clear, crisp mountain air into her damaged lungs.

The cool, gentle breeze brushing her cheeks brought back sweet memories of years gone by.

How she’d loved it when he use to stroke her chubby cheeks with the back of his hand.

“Did I really have chubby cheeks?”, she thought, as she fingered the starkly protruding blue veins on the back of her gaunt hand.

Feeling herself sliding back into the dark hole of hopelessness and despair, Sheila shook her body and lifted her gaze to the distant snow-clad mountains. The beauty and strength emanating from these mighty creations gave her the necessary push she needed to carry on.

Standing up, she took resolute steps forward, crossing the bridge that would bring her to the holy temple. Here she would offer prayers for the strength to fight this terrible disease.

She’d come this far, she’d conquered the long serpentine track all the way to the top and she just knew she could conquer the rest.

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April 30, 2010 Post Under Flash Fiction - Comments
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  • http://intangibleabhisek.blogspot.com Abhi

    hmm… initially i had thought in a similar line.. of a person revisiting the place.. n remembrance of the the previous memories at the sight of the place… but I couldn’t make it.. u cud do justice to the whole plot with some meaningful end to it

  • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

    This post made me think of my grandma. She shares that fighting spirit and never say die attitude too. With such strong a will, I’m sure she’ll conquer the rest.

  • http://lifeaseetees.blogspot.com/ Kits

    Lovely this is…and the images u bring to mind r niceness as well :)

  • http://margaretsagri.blogspot.com/ Margaret

    Abhi
    Thanks! Yes, I could have done more with this, but I left it a bit late and ended up rushing it to get it in on time!! Hope to give the next one more time… :) )

    Aniket
    Your grandma sounds like an amazing woman. We can learn a lot from the older generation – they had to fight hard to achieve their goals.

    Kits
    Thanks a million for your lovely comment… glad you could imagine it well.

    • http://flashfiction.in Aniket

      She sure is. None of our ancestors believed in education. All had small businesses of their own.

      My grandma fought with everyone to get my Dad through school and college. And my dad, now Assistant General Manager in the 3rd largest Steel Plant in the country, carried forward that belief to us. You can imagine, that one decision of hers changed our lives and lifestyle. So I have utmost respect for her.

  • http://adycted.blogspot.com adycted

    Hey,

    This does not seem rushed at all. Infact I am amazed of how much you could do with the basic plot with all the detail put in. Its bittersweet to me. I would love to read more from you soon!

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