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“You had to bring him up here, didn’t you?” Susan said as Rufus ran circles around her

“What else was I supposed to do? Leave him alone at home while we go hiking for two days?” Mark defended.

“We could have left him with Sharon.”

“You know he hates Sharon!”

“He’s a dog! I’m sure he can adjust for a couple of days”

“Oh so he’s just a dog now?” Mark turned to Susan, “And who says ‘Come to Mommy’ a million times a day?”

“You know I love him and didn’t mean it like that. He is not just a dog, but he is getting old and I don’t know if he’ll be able to go through the trip.”

“He is not old. Look at him running those circles around you.”

“He is eight, Mark. That’s like 80 in dog years.”

“Dogs don’t have their calenders. Eight years is just eight years. He’s in the best shape of his life. Aren’t you Rufy?”

Rufus let his tongue out and wiggled his tail.

“See. He agrees” Mark proudly flashed his whites.

“Don’t you agree that your Paa is a stubborn old man, Rufus?” asked Susan with her hands on her waist.

Rufus turned to her and wiggled his tail again.

“And he agrees” she retorted.

“Guess you’ll be staying at Sharon’s next time, eh?” Mark gruffed.

With that Rufus sprinted across to the other side of the bridge.

“Told you he didn’t like Sharon”, Mark grinned, “I’ll go ahead and see he doesn’t wander off too far.”

“Wait for me Mark. I can’t cross this bridge on my own.”

“Guess Rufus ain’t the only one getting old.”

“Its got nothing to do with my age. I’m scared of heights.”

“Why the hell did you agree to go on a trek then? What did you think, we’ll be going to the middle earth?”, said Mark, who was already half-way across the bridge.

“I can see now that it was clearly a mistake. Now you’re coming back here or what?”

“I better check on Rufus first. Come on wifey, you can do it. Its just a bridge.” Mark got off the bridge and went after Rufus.

“Mark. I demand you come back here… please. Please, come back. Mark! Maaaark! There’ll be no breakfast for you for a month. Six months! I mean it!”

Ever since I took the red pill, life's been an ongoing mission to find out how deep this rabbit hole goes. I'm mostly harmless, unless... arrgh... unless you do THAT!
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  • http://amsko.wordpress.com Amrita

    He he…. i like it… I like ur ability to turn the story in completely positive angle. I somehow alwyas get a dark ending in mine… :(

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      Oh, I write dark and gory stuff too, I like dark and twisty. Depends on the mood. The last one here was far from positive. ;)

  • http://intangibleabhisek.blogspot.com Abhi

    hehe… short n crisp!

    You could really create a beautiful lighter moments which initially seemed to be heavy stuff!

    Great work

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      Thank you!

  • http://margaretsagri.blogspot.com/ Margaret

    Well Aniket you certainly brought a smile to my face with this dialogue between the two of them!

    It’s so obvious that they’re married! :D

    I love the sharpness and crispness you brought into it and very well paced – not too long or too short.

    By the way, dogs love trekking, no matter how old they are – so tell Susan that Rufus should never be left with Sharon! :)

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      I don’t know how I missed replying you on this. May be I was home at that time.
      I’m glad you liked the piece and point noted about dogs. This is research for the next piece. :)

  • http://adycted.blogspot.com adycted

    Its like I know them. Its funny, charming… all at the same time. You can almost picture the couple bickering!

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      :) I’m glad this felt real to you. And sorry for replying so late…

  • http://www.amitu.com/blog/ Amit Upadhyay

    And Mark came back every morning for next six month to feed on Susan after she died there left alone on the bridge. She was so wrong about the breakfast.

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      Okay, no more zombie movies for you! :)