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The Final Embrace

The Final Embrace

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Behind the doors, beyond the sea

Knew not gloom, knew not glee;

Spirit of the lake and seas and rivers

Frothing spasms, bone chilling shivers

Death but gently kissed

 

 

Time and space frozen again

Silence surrounds, sorrow strains

Anguish impaired, infected reason

Crimson terror persecuted vision

The bottle slyly hissed

 

 

Healing herbs turned assassin

Victim of a crime of passion

Love defeated, prosecutor Envy

Here he lies, where he longs to be

Embraced by the mist

Morbid and Insane. Need you know more?
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Written by: Kreation on May 2, 2010.
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  • http://intangibleabhisek.blogspot.com Abhi

    Quite philosophical, could get some part of it. Will have to read once again to get a better idea.

    Are you talking about the death of a person due to alcohol?

    correct me i’m wrong

  • http://kreation-soul.blogspot.com/ Kreation

    Through poison actually. :)

    I’m glad you took out time to read and actually attempted to understand the poem. Not many people are so patient. Thank you so much! :)

  • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

    Welcome! I’m so glad your exams are over! :D

    My fav. lines have to be :

    “Crimson terror persecuted vision
    The bottle slyly hissed”

    Judicious choice of words with a characteristic Kriti’s touch of blood & death . Love its. :P

  • http://adycted.blogspot.com adycted

    I loved ‘Victim of a crime of passion’..I can imagine the slow death, wanting it to finish off quickly but waiting… Its commendable to come out with this piece that has to be felt so deeply to write. But then again thats what you do so well, time and again.

  • http://intangibleabhisek.blogspot.com Abhi

    @Kreation: ur selection of words made me read the whole of it. It definitely needed me to pause the background music playing on my system, the second read made me understand some of it..

    now i understand why the above comments by others are so good…

    keep posting

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