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Tick Tock

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“Hey! Watch where are you going?”


The man who had pushed his way through him didn’t bother to turn back. He just flicked him a finger as he kept running.


A hand rested on Will’s shoulder and he turned to acknowledge the person it belonged to.


“Now what the fuck do you want?” said Will as he shrugged the strangers hand off his shoulder.

“You manage to piss off people quite easily, don’t you?”


“Look. Whoever you are, I don’t want to buy anything. I just want to quietly wait for my train.”


“Trust me, you do want to hear me out…”


“Look I’m trying to be polite here. I seriously don’t have the time for this.”


The stranger chuckled, “Funny you should say that. For I have all the time in the world. But you’re right. There is no point in talking. You would’ve never believed me in any case. Its better if I just showed you. Look at that clock” He snapped open his umbrella and grabbed Will’s shoulder.


In a flash of a second, they were standing on the road amidst heavy rain.


“What the hell just happened? How did… how did we…get here? You.. you did that? Who are you?”


“You sure want to talk now, don’t you?” Will could tell that the stranger sported an evil grin under the hood of the umbrella as he continued, “As for who I am, the answer is that I am a time lord. In simple terms I control time. And as for how do I do that, well there is no way I can put it that your bean-brain would understand.”


“Where are we?” Will stammered.


“Oh, come on you know this place. You do recognize that watch tower don’t you? The correct question would be when are we? The answer to that is the watch tower there. We haven’t traveled much. In fact, its the same day. Just nine hours after I met you at the station.”


“Why did you bring me here? What do you want from me?”


“Can you see a man lying near those steps? Thats you.”


Will choked on his each word as he uttered, “Me? Why am I lying on the ground? What happened to me?”


“Well, you’re dead of course. Otherwise I would have been to all this trouble for nothing.”


Will was drenched in rain but one could still identify his tears. “How did this happen? How…?”


“You get murdered this day at 8:44 pm”

“So that’s why you came to meet me? So that you can prevent my death?” he looked at the time lord with hopeful eyes. “You can take me to the time I get murdered right? And stop it?”


“Umm. Yes I CAN. Of course. But then, what would be the fun in that?” Will stared at him, open-mouthed in horror. “You see, being a time lord, I am an immortal with an eternity to live for. And when you’ve got all the time in the world, the world gets, well – boring! So here I am to add a little spice to it.”


He snapped the umbrella shut and placed a hand on his shoulder again. They snapped back to the station, will still soaked in water.


The time lord spoke softly this time, “You have till 8:44 in the evening to save yourself, if you can. I’ll be watching.”


“Wait. Who kills me?” Will pleaded.


The time lord snapped his fingers and was gone. His words still lingering behind him, “If not sooner, you’ll find out in another nine hours”


Ever since I took the red pill, life's been an ongoing mission to find out how deep this rabbit hole goes. I'm mostly harmless, unless... arrgh... unless you do THAT!
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June 25, 2010 Post Under Flash Fiction - Comments
  • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

    I know. Its another time travel story!

    I blame it on over watching of Dr. Who. :)

  • http://www.kreation-soul.blogspot.com Kriti

    I wish it didn’t leave me feeling so unsatisfied! This one needs a sequel, Ani!

    • http://flashfiction.in Aniket

      I think its a good plot to make it a short story. I might just write one, if I figure out a satisfying ending and if you promise to read once its done. ;)

  • http://lyricsandmaladies.blogspot.com/ joaquin

    chapter 1? very intriguing – reads like an opening scene in what would likely be an intense action movie.

    love the attitude of will in the beginning – i’m not sure if i want to root for him or not – in fact, i’m not sure who the good guy is, or if there is one – which makes it even more interesting.

    i want to read more too – but as it is, it’s a tremedous springboard for the imagaination!

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      I wanted to keep both the characters gray. As Sarah mentioned, I was imagining how the character could change when he faces this crisis. He could repent or he could also go all dark just to save himself. I’m still thinking!

  • http://lifeaseetees.blogspot.com/ Kits

    Nice work man. I want to know more. What happens next? Seems v v intriguing. Do agree with Joaquin’s comment that I am not entirely with Will at this stage…keep it comin Aniket :)

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      Thanks a ton! Will let you all know when(if) I expand this one.

  • Sarah

    You’re such a teaser, Aniket! :)

    I’d really like to see this expanded, too. And to see if/how Will escapes his destiny. (hey, “Will” is a good name, too–you could set up a free will/fate dynamic) It would be interesting to show a character’s growth over the course of such a crisis. In addition to all the cool suspense and sci-fi stuff. :)

    Very intriguing.

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      Leave it to you to make it sound all cool! :P I didn’t even think that deep while writing it. But now that you’ve mentioned it, my braincells are humming. :)