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Tea for Two…Adieu

Tea for Two…Adieu

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She was later than usual, and he felt her slipping further away. Even sitting in the

warm afternoon sun in front of the little cafe, he felt a chill. One day soon, he knew

she would no longer come at all. He would not look up and see her breathless smile

as she walked toward him. Ah, but there she was, beautiful, glowing and sleek. An

explosive kick to the ego of a man in middle age.


“Forgive me?” Of course he would.

“Love me?” He always would.

“Miss me?” With fearful certainty, he would.


He ordered hot tea and croissants, their usual fare. She added spoons of sugar to

her tea, making it almost too sweet. Like her, he thought. He wondered what today’s

excuse for tardiness would be. She was usually quite creative.


“I have news.” She looked for his reaction.


“I have been offered a job back home, in the States. I said yes, and I leave in a week’s

time. Will you come with me?”


“My love, you flatter me. You know I cannot leave Paris. Even for you.” Each word

had been an effort, but he must be firm in his decision. He had a family, his parents,

his children, his wife who had not slept with him in years. They all depended on him,

looked for his emotional strength and financial support. He felt suddenly older and

less significant. This beautiful young woman before him had asked just this one thing

of him, and it was the one thing he could not give.


Their food and tea sat before them, untouched, and now unwanted. Today was the

last tea for two.


“Adieu.”

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July 5, 2010 Post Under Flash Fiction - Comments
  • Aerin

    This strikes me a little too closely; I love it, truly, truly love it.

  • http://flashfiction.in Aniket

    It is very well crafted piece. No word is wasted.
    And so much is said about the characters by showing their mannerisms.

    It felt very real. Thank you for such a good read.

  • http://lifeaseetees.blogspot.com/ Kits

    So much emotion in such less words. As Aniket says accurately, it is really well crafted.

  • http://lyricsandmaladies.blogspot.com/ joaquin

    i like this one – very tight, but more than meets the eye. he knows it’s coming but still isn’t ready for it. and with her goes his illusions of hmself. nicely done, especially in how you let the reader reach their own conclusions about him. well done!

  • Aerin

    I keep coming back to this one; Virginia, I don’t suppose you’ve written other things because….wow, would I like to read them.

  • http://www.catvibe.net/blog Catherine Vibert

    Ouch! So well written…