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one lonely night

one lonely night

Written by: nutan.julka

Girl
Jessie met her man and was on a date,
she was very happy heart beatin at fast rate.
Had lot of fun and was on a dream ride,
just then realised the stars were twinkling and it was late night.
bid her byes and rushed to catch the train..
had to reach home before midnight.
dreaming all way of the happy day spent she reached her station and was past midnight,
she got frightned as it was a lonely night.
out came two boys and held her way,
was very scared and asked them to go away.
they closed her mouth so she could not scream,
morning she realised it was not a dream.
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August 31, 2010 Post Under FlashFiction Not-on-Prompt - Comments
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2 Responses to “one lonely night”

  1. Noopur Julka says:

    the last two lines are very touchy!
    gud work !

  2. tvalentine0825 says:

    Very very powerful towards the end!

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