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My wife is a mother now.  She’s not just a lover with balmy skin under the weight of my body.  She’s delicate and eager.

Her breasts are dry, sometimes shriveled around the nipple after the baby feeds from them.  The bags under her eyes are becoming a deeper hue of purple as the sleepless nights continue.  We haven’t had sex since the baby was born.  She’s still sexy though, especially with her new pronounced curves.

She makes a wonderful dulcet sound at night.  It’s from the pressure of the baby asleep on her chest.  It’s as if, even in her sleep, she’s struggling to breathe for two.

Last week I woke up to a slight chugging sound.  I started to wake and through the slits of my eyes all I could see were breast pumps strapped on to her chest.  The skin around the tight plastic seemed to swell and turn red.  There was a hum to the machine that almost lulled me back to sleep.  I fell into a sheepish daze, as the noise became a rhythm.

I am a Senior at UNC studying English and Creative Writing. Poetry has always been my passion but recently I have been dabbling within the realm of flash fiction and I am loving it :)
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  • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

    I was going to comment that this post is surely written by a person who really loves his wife, but then I noticed it has a female author. ;) I’ve read very few flash pieces that are so close to reality and have honest emotions.

    I’m no father but I can imagine that you can not raise a kid if you can not find a melody in dissonance.
    Thank you for sharing this.

  • Sar

    Thanks so much Aniket! I really appreaciate it, especially since I am a new author here :)

    It is so refreshing to write from a foreign perspective, and when it is believable, I am extremely happy! I have to tell you, your pieces are very inspiring. They are all wonderful and I love reading them. I can’t wait to read more work from you!

  • http://malvika-thesearchwithin.blogspot.com Malvika

    Sensuality is comfort, a knowing that comes with a confident promise that everything is for permanent, that change will be seen as beautiful, that ageing will only reflect grace, that years to follow will be observed with acceptance – Love is not 20s or 30s, it is how fiercely you still own another at 70… I pray for a guy like this! I will know no nothing dismal, life will be Life… continuing with consistence, growing will be growing up and together, not growing old and alone…

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