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You broke my walls

and stormed inside

My ego dropped

from highest height


You broke my guard

and made me fall

in love with you

and that wasn’t all


You broke my greed

You broke my pride

Broke my flight

and made me glide


You broke my dusk

You broke my dawn

And fixed a man

I gave up on.

Ever since I took the red pill, life's been an ongoing mission to find out how deep this rabbit hole goes. I'm mostly harmless, unless... arrgh... unless you do THAT!
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  • http://margaretsagri.blogspot.com Margaret

    Aniket, I love this poem!!

    It’s so deep, has a wonderful pace and really gets to the reader. It’s the kind of poem that once you get to the end it makes you go back to the beginning and read it again and again.

    She must be one hell of a girl!! :-)

    • http://flashfiction.in Aniket

      Sadly, there is no girl..yet! I just have good imagination. ;)
      Thank you for the lovely comment though. Someday soon I won’t have to use so much of my imagination. :)

      • http://wellmylifemyway@blogspot.com TFL

        who ever that girl will be..she will be the luckiest of the lot..to have someone write poems for her..who knows even sonnets ;)

  • http://margaretsagri.blogspot.com Margaret

    She’s out there somewhere and if this is just your imagination then I can’t wait to read your poems once you do meet her! :)

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      I hope I don’t disappoint you. :)

  • http://wellmylifemyway@blogspot.com TFL

    Anakin- slywalker!! I love this poem..so glad that my comeback on blog world is welcomed with such a beautiful poem =)

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      Sorry for the late reply. Was caught up in my other life. :)
      I haven’t been blogging much lately, but I’m glad you are back at it again. I wish to do the same soon.

      So when am I reading more of your work?

  • Jan

    Loved it! Thanks for sharing.

    • http://foolishnessofthings.blogspot.com Aniket

      I’m glad you liked it, Jan. Thank you for your appreciation.

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