In my the previous post Jason commented:
“My challenge here would be for you to deliver little doses of exposition through action and dialogue, rather than giving the background of each character directly to the reader”
It seemed like a fun task, so I took up his challenge. Here is a similar story (not same mind you 
). Last time it all played out in narration, this time I’ve tried to do it with dialogues.
Feedback, as always, is most welcome. 
Monday, June 8, 2009
“Mom, I’m going to play with Jim; will come back in a couple of hours.”
Kevin shouted on top of his lungs and dashed out, not waiting for a reply.
He loved the fact that he lived in down town.
The streets were always bustling with people; even on a bright Saturday morning.
He loved watching the college girls who used to hang around.
He took a detour just to walk by the shops, for just that.
He trotted his way, his football clutched in his hands when… Continue reading
Wednesday, June 10, 2009
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